Simplifying Your Life Message

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I am preparing for another Toastmaster (public speaking) project on 30th of June. And this time, the project is about Persuading with Power. I was thinking about a topic to share about in my next speech, and GTD came out.

Getting Things Done is the topic I have shared earlier in my previous project. This time I am going to repeat the same message with different structure and purpose. Basically, I’m integrating the lessons I have learned from the earlier speech. These are some of them.

1. Simplify

Recently, while searching for a quote from Timothy Ferris on Four-Hour Work Week, I came across the comparison between the two productivity teachings from Clay Collins. Over there GTD sounded like the one disadvantaged. Look at the diagram provided there and you can see how complicated it is.

The lost faces, that’s what I saw from the audience while presenting GTD. Partly, it was the problem with the visual aid I brought. But I believe that the bigger part of the reason was the topic itself. GTD surely seems to be much more complicated for those who know about it for the first time. My earlier speech was built with a purpose to teach them GTD, every steps of it, even more with some software tips for them to start with.

I aimed for too many things for a speech delivered only within 5-7 minutes. Eventually I got none of them. This time, I have to simplify my speech. Accepting the time limitations that I have, I have to focus on one purpose. As this speech is about persuading with power, I’ll simplify my purpose not to teach GTD, but to get them interested in GTD.

2. Justify

If you watch the video of my earlier speech here, you’ll see that my audiences are pretty excited with the jump I make at the end of my speech. That is to emphasize the “Just Do It” part. The fun part of all, but it’s actually not my main message. My evaluator, Risyad pointed out that I should have got my audience excited much earlier in the message. It’s a good point, and this time I’ll use the idea.

I’ll start with the fun part, the “Just Do It”, a concept that is much more familiar to my audience. From there, I will need to appeal for the need of structure in spontaneity. It’s actually an idea from the book “Blink” from Malcolm Gladwell. “Just Do It”, no matter how fun it could be, it needs a structure to ensure that the “It” is the right thing. It’s not any “It” but the task that you have identified as the most appropriate next action you’ve got to make.

Why am I sharing this strategy to you?

First of all, I’d like to thank Michael Chang, one experienced Toastmasters from NTU Alumni Club that has ever evaluated my speech. He didn’t only observe the speech I presented that day, he read through my history and pointed me my repetitive mistakes. It’s really an extra mile that not many evaluators will do.

Do you know what did he point out? It’s the tendency of putting too many messages in my speech. I have too much to tell in such a short speech. He asked me to simplify my message. And for that he asked me to focus on the purpose of my speech.

How will it apply to you? I hope that this will teach you one thing or two if you have a habit of giving speech. Find a Toastmasters Club near you if you’d like to improve your communication skill.

But more than that, I hope it will also appeal to you to simplify your life message. You can say it’s the focus in life, but you can also call it the serenity in life. If you’re not perfect in anything, it’s okay. You don’t have to. You’ve just got to simplify, because each of us has something to teach and share.

Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away.
~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Simplifying,
Robert

9 Comments

  1. Hotel Melbourne

    on 23rd Jun, 09 02:06pm

    You had very deep experience of life. Thanks for sharing such nice strategy with us. You had given very much interesting knowledge.

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    on 23rd Jun, 09 09:06pm

    Message presenting is a nice concept for inspiring and motivating ideas.

  3. Nicole Price

    on 23rd Jun, 09 10:06pm

    Good advise from Michael Chang. It is nice that you listened to him and learnt from his observations.
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  4. Shamelle -Enhance Life

    on 24th Jun, 09 01:06am

    I have read Timothy Ferris and David Allen on simplification.

    Yes.. they make it sound so.. easy.. The truth is the hardest part is getting started and sticking into it.

    Good post
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  5. Robert A.

    on 25th Jun, 09 01:06am

    @Nicole. Yeah, I agree. He’s really a mentor that is willing to go beyond the extra mile.

    @Shamelle. Thanks! Actually I found that some of them might be quite complicated also, that’s why, rather than implementing all they taught, I will go with simpler approach first.

    Cheers!
    Robert

  6. Hotel Melbourne

    on 26th Jun, 09 02:06pm

    That is really appreciate able to the part of the writer of this post.

  7. fourposter beds

    on 25th Jul, 09 02:07pm

    Its really a nice strategy and it also a nice thing that you are sharing it with us. Sharing is a good thing for exchange the thoughts.
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  8. videostar

    on 20th Aug, 09 02:08pm

    The strategy is of genius.It is worth mastering.
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  9. Tipsy

    on 21st Aug, 09 05:08pm

    The understanding is the common problem in any presentation/writing or sometimes even in ordinary life. Comparing this to a man-woman relationship, sometimes it seems that those two halves of one heart can be so far from each other that any understanding could not be possible. But sometimes you just need an open mind and a will to talk. But with some people that are alien to you things get complicated as they just want to understand what you are trying to say. I would say that simplify is like you said one of the most important things here.
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